The minister asked me to write down what I love about my fiance. What do you think of my response?

I think your response is very sweet. When it comes down to things like this, I would prefer to hear what you would have to say, verbatim. It doesn't matter if it is cheesy. What matters is that it is all from you, from your heart. That is what is important. Nothing else. Reading it, I get what you mean. What captures your sentiments is what you say about your impending anniversary. That you will still be amazed that you married him. If any woman were to tell me that, it would turn me to mush. It would make my heart flutter inside and I would twitter my response. It's very heartfelt. You did very well.